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December 14th, 2010, 3:52 pm

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Reply Scotty6000, December 14th, 2010, 3:55 pm

Like it says in the description. I want you guys to heavily critique this comic. Tell me what you like and disliked about it =D And to start things off, ill go first. XD
The plants a bit dull and unimaginative in the design. I probably should have used references of plants for inspiration instead of doing it at the top of my head XD
Although I do like how the sun beams in the background ended up lol

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Reply Scotty6000, December 19th, 2010, 4:07 pm

To Ashes2Steel: Lol thanks for your positive input XD But I think its also good for me to critisize myself and doing it so far and reading what others have to say has given me a lot to learn and think about! =D

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Reply ashes2steel, December 17th, 2010, 11:06 pm

Hey Scotts-meister, I know I'm a little inexperienced to give out advice or anythin', but I wanna help ya along, so I'll throw in an idea or two out there if I see anything I think is outta place or anythin'.

The thing I wanna say here is that I disagree with you on saying the plant is unimaginative. It might look kinda "blah" or something to you, but I think it goes well with what the dialogue is sayin'. The feeling is "I do so much for such a simple thing" and therefore, I think it's fitting if the rose looks "simple" and such in design. It intrigues the reader to go "Huh, she's risking life and death over this... I wonder what's so special about it? I'll keep reading to find out!" At least that's what went through my mind >3>

Reply ashes2steel, January 5th, 2011, 5:50 pm

No problem, I understand :)

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