December 14th, 2010, 3:55 pm

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Reply Scotty6000, December 14th, 2010, 3:58 pm

Like it says in the description. I want you guys to heavily critique this comic. Tell me what you like and disliked about it =D And to start things off, ill go first. XD

Hmm. I really gotta fix text in the first speech bubble. Its really crooked and funny looking XD

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Reply Scotty6000, December 14th, 2010, 4:27 pm

REPLYS To sbdrag: lol thank you. And youre right XD That chick with the short hair doesnt come off as too feminine. When she shows up later hopefully shell look more like a chick XD

To Forgotten Cake: Thank you ^^
OH, and now that you mention it, I see what you mean with their heads! Ill keep that in mind in the future =D
And ive been told I draw very androgynous females in my other comics too XD. Ive still gotta find that good balance of androgynous yet still destinctly feminine.

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Reply sbdrag, December 14th, 2010, 4:01 pm

Actually, I like the first speech bubble. It adds to the tone of the voice, as well as the font. And in the second panel, I really like the girl's expression, because you can tell she's surprised and scared at the same time. Though, I couldn't tell the first one was a girl until I noticed the cleavage... ^^'

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