December 14th, 2010, 4:03 pm

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Reply Scotty6000, December 14th, 2010, 4:03 pm

Now that I see it altogether. The flow from page 4-5 was very abrupt and not very smooth in the transition. Ill have to work on that in the future =O

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Reply Scotty6000, December 14th, 2010, 4:29 pm

REPLYS To sbdrag: yup yup. Their pedals XD

To Metaishopeless: Yah, it didnt click until now that the transition doesnt quiete work. XD But im glad your interested! ^^

To Forgotten Cake: thank you! =D

To Cherri: Thank you! ^^

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Reply sbdrag, December 14th, 2010, 4:05 pm

Are those pedals in the first panel? They look sharp...

Reply metaishopeless, December 14th, 2010, 4:48 pm

I agree that the flow of the first few pages in abrupt and could use a few more to smooth out the transition; but you still generated interest and I will keep watching this. :>

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