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December 17th, 2010, 5:17 pm

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Reply Scotty6000, December 17th, 2010, 5:17 pm

The backgrounds not as lively as I had first hoped. Plus the leaf-bed next to the new girl kinda seems out of place. Like the perspective on it is off.

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Reply Scotty6000, December 19th, 2010, 4:00 pm

To Sbdrag: Yah, I had the idea that they each get theyre own leave bed but It looks too off. OH! And ill edit that asap XDD

To Ashes2Steel: lol

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Okay! Its been updated now =D

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Reply sbdrag, December 17th, 2010, 6:23 pm

It is kind of funky... is there a second leaf bud? And oh, she's creepy... but her hair looks different than what I pictured in the last page...

And I like the light source, too, since it;s consistent. (I have trouble with that...)

EDIT:

oh, and it's "were"

Reply ashes2steel, December 17th, 2010, 11:50 pm

Yeah, already pointed out, the typo of "were." o3o

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