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December 17th, 2010, 5:20 pm

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Reply Scotty6000, December 17th, 2010, 5:20 pm

Last panel seems to be slightly dull. Should I add some small amount of toning to her to give some shape or just leave it as is?

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Reply Scotty6000, December 19th, 2010, 4:05 pm

To Sbdrag: Lol yay for her lookin more feminine! XD
Yah, i think ill try and tone the last panel and see how it looks. If its too much ill just leave it as is =D
And thanks XD

To Ashes2Steel: Lol ill try it out and see. XD In the future I do wanna try less toning tho! =O

To That Skippy: lol Thanks =3

To Silus.S: XD lol crap. another misspelling! XD Thankfully my friend pointed this one out before I got it printed lol

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Reply sbdrag, December 17th, 2010, 6:27 pm

I like it as it is... but toning might bring her out more. Also, yay, she looks more feminine now! =)

Also, with the toning, you do picture the light source in the first panel, but not the second...

And I love the expressions they have, it shows not just how angry she is, but something of their relationship (I think) as well.

Reply ashes2steel, December 17th, 2010, 11:56 pm

my philosophy on toning is "the less clutter, the better." Honestly, I think it looks fine. I'm not that big on using tones to shadow, however - I usually use tones just to suggest different colors, and you've seen me hatch my comics :I So here it's your call, I don't think it would be that big a deal to tone her on the last panel.

Reply That Skippy (Guest), December 18th, 2010, 10:45 pm

title Only two page?! :o

And I think the whole page looks nice. It might look over done if you add anything more.

Reply Silus.S., January 2nd, 2011, 9:06 am

Ah, I just noticed too, is 'we're' meant to be 'were'?

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