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December 31st, 2010, 3:50 pm

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Reply Scotty6000, December 31st, 2010, 3:34 pm

OMG. Action in this comic just had FAIL on it. XDD Ill have to work my ass off to better layout the panels and give a better sense of action! >3

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Reply Scotty6000, January 2nd, 2011, 3:36 am

To Guest: lol ill keep that in mind then! =D And thank you! ^^

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Reply Guest, January 1st, 2011, 1:03 am

I think if you added more movement, like knee bending and hunching over a bit more, the action of her awaiting an attack would look more "actiony". I like how you drew the beast in the first panel, but I ADORE how you drew it in the third. For the most part, the page has excellent flow, and for me, it's the last panel that throws it off slightly. Still, it's amazing quality. :D

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