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December 31st, 2010, 5:00 pm

Average Rating: 5.00
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Reply Scotty6000, December 31st, 2010, 3:53 pm

Its the last page!
I think i went a big overboard on the bg. XDD Too many sparkles! lol

Overall, i think there were some good ideas but I just didnt execute them very well. I dont think this will get me a contract, but hopefully they see some sort of potential in me lol.
In the end, Ive leared a lot. A month of work on this from start to finish. Im happy I at least entered. Time to take what ive learned from this and use them for my future comics.

Thank you to everyone for your comments and helpful insight! =D

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Reply Scotty6000, January 2nd, 2011, 3:40 am

To metaishopeless: Now that I look back at this, yah, your completetly right! =O For some reason it just didnt click while i was working on it. Ill keep this in mind in the future ^^ Thanks for your input!! =3

Lol, someday I DO plan to make this into a full story. Itll most likely be on my own time and not with yen press. XDD lol This isnt contract worthy. But ill get better! >3
Ill take what i learned from this short and improve it >=3

@NeuroticSoulGobbler: <33 Thank you for reading! Im definitly gonna revisit this story with some big improvements ;3 And there will be more people just like them lol

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Reply metaishopeless, December 31st, 2010, 5:29 pm

The issues with this that stood out the most was that you had too many pages that were only one or just a few panels. You could fit in a lot more story if you had more panels, and often the panels you did have served little point or were just there to take up space.

Other than that, I liked this, I agree you had some nice ideas, and I would like to read more if there is ever a future for it. :P

Reply ashes2steel, January 5th, 2011, 5:49 pm

I don't get it - what does she have to GAIN, or to LOSE? And the mechanizations of this malfunctioning Santa suit completely ELUDE me!

o3o *blinks*

*gets stuffed under bed*

Lol scotty :P I like it - I'm sure when the time comes and you make it into a series it'll be up to snuff! \o3o/

Psst, just don't tell Moose you killed a moose in your comic :U lol

Reply NeuroticSoulGobbler, November 1st, 2011, 8:45 pm

I'm REALLY curious about that flower now!! DX Are there more people like them? ARGH!! All the questions I have!! This would definitely be a good series if or when you pick it up again. :D

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